Tuesday, November 18, 2008

'Ashaly Goes to School' by Natalie (age 7)

Once there was a girl named Ashaly.  It was her first day of school.  Ashaly was scared.  
Her mom said, "Come on."
She did not come on.  Ashaly's mom pulled and pulled, then she finally came.
Mom and Ashaly pull up to the school.  Ashaly wanted to get out, but she was way too scared.  Mom helped her to get out.  
Ashaly figured out her teacher was awesome.  First they did some math, then they ate snack and then did some coloring.  Next they ate lunch but a mean little boy sat next to her.
"He's a big bully!" said her friend.
The little boy said, "She kicks people."
She ignored him and went outside.
Last they got picked up by their mom.

The End

Dad's note: Not bad for a first story.  We are going to add a little to it and make a short film out of it over vacation.  Look for it to be posted sometime this spring.  I'll post revisions as they become available.